When God Took His Time (Poem for Mother's Day)
When
God Took His Time
Hands sterilized, dripping anointing from the fingers,
Away from the bare table made of marble
And the surface of a pulsing star,
I imagine God creating you in this manner.
Grabbing the blueprints of the good book
Naked of binding and names of men,
He wanted to give it spice
only a rib could initiate.
He made your mind out of the galaxy’s infinity,
Filling the gaps with intuition and empathy,
creating space everywhere else
For a husband, children, and self-development.
He wrote in his notes that your hair
Will be your natural crown,
Your ears will keep secrets,
that your hips will
carry nations.
You were layered with enough
To deflect assumptions and provocation,
Your labor will birth life
And liberty, a way to renew.
Smiling upon completion,
He breathes your presentation
Amidst man’s slumber,
Making you his dream best formed.
Calvin W. Pennywell Jr.
(2017)
That was so beautiful. I love how you said "He made your mind out of the galaxy's infinity" It gives me the idea that a mother's mind is full of too many things for a person to learn. I also loved "He wrote in his notes that your hair will be your natural crown, Your ears will keep secrets..." As you've described your own mother to me, that seems like a line that, unlike the others, is specifically about her. The others may be able to apply to other mothers, but this is one line that reminds me of the specific way you've described your own. I really enjoy reading your pieces, even though poetry was meant to be heard. I enjoy "hearing with my eyes" and letting the sound manifest in my head as imagery. This is such a lovely piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you, darling :) As you know, our mothers are catered to our personal needs as children. That explains why He chose them for us. He knew exactly what we would need. Thank you for you endless encouragement and I pray I continue to utilize my gift as a way to give life and not take it away.
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